Any Thoughts on these Type Explorations, Anyone?

I think I know which one I'm going with, but I wanted to see if anyone would be so kind to give me some feedback. Well, my concept is about how the introduction of tourism into a culture hurts it's authenticity so I'm trying to communicate some type of break or removal in the type a bit more.


  1. i feel like it's a good call to, if you split left from right rather than top from bottom, make the split occur somewhere between re- and -moved rather than right in the middle, because there's a natural and important wordbreak there. i feel like the serif vs sans serif ones say something different than the removal of culture... they say more about assimilation, kind of? i dunno if that makes any sense. hope this was helpful!

  2. Have you thought about removing any letters? like the "O". It'd still read as removed. My only concern about it would be that it suggested a movement or displacement of the culture or its authenticity instead of suggesting that the culture was affected by tourism.

  3. Both really good suggestions, thanks guys!